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Fic: Sam Is... (PG, Gen)

I had the day off work, and, instead of working on my crossover epic, I wrote this *sheepish smile*. Don't worry though, I still have a chapter of the crossover to post on Wednesday.

Title: Sam Is...
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Rating: PG
Genre: Gen
Words: 5,993
Disclaimer: Transformative work of fiction, not for profit.
Warnings: Spoilers for 6x08
A/N: This is not how it's going to happen, but I felt like writing it anyway...AU for the end of S6? It's basically H/C porn (without actual porn).

Summary: Dean gets Sam back

Sam was catatonic. He just lay there staring at nothing. When Dean waved a hand in front of his face, his eyes tracked, but they didn’t seem to focus.Collapse )

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cece_away
Nov. 19th, 2010 03:57 am (UTC)
Taking care of a "disabled" person is exhausting. I felt for Dean over this even knowing he would do it forever. Pretty damn heartbreaking . . . as was Sam finally coming out of it.
hells_half_acre
Nov. 19th, 2010 05:48 am (UTC)
Indeed. I've seen some fics that "glamorize" it a little too much for my liking...going on and on about how exhausting it is would make the fic even more depressing through, so I tried to strike a good balance.
cappy712
Nov. 19th, 2010 05:18 am (UTC)
This was great. I had posted on Facebook a few times that when Sam comes back it's not going to be pretty. I didn't go into it like you did which was amazing.

I hope they don't just gloss over when He does have his soul back, and I liked your take on it. Very good. Thank you for sharing.
hells_half_acre
Nov. 19th, 2010 05:49 am (UTC)
Thank you.

I'm really looking forward to seeing what they do...because I highly doubt they'll gloss over it too much. I mean, they won't make it as horrible as I made it here, but they have to do SOMETHING.

Thanks for reading!
werty30
Nov. 19th, 2010 01:18 pm (UTC)
Loved it!
hells_half_acre
Nov. 19th, 2010 06:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
legio_felicia
Nov. 21st, 2010 03:44 am (UTC)
“Satan hates your car,” Sam says.</q>

A total mood breaker but so Winchester.

hells_half_acre
Nov. 21st, 2010 03:54 am (UTC)
Yeah, leave it to a Winchester to completely ruin the magic. :P

Thanks for reading!
dristi2u
Nov. 23rd, 2010 12:36 pm (UTC)
...there're no words for this gem of a story! wow! i don't know what to say, but i sure hope to read more from you...
hells_half_acre
Nov. 23rd, 2010 06:03 pm (UTC)
I've got a few more short pieces, though, I must say, none of them have received as much feedback as this one has. I've truly been amazed by the positive feedback to this piece.

Including yours! Thank you for the kind words! :)
lyxie
Nov. 23rd, 2010 01:34 pm (UTC)
Honestly, I don't know whether to cry my eyes out of smile. Great job!
hells_half_acre
Nov. 23rd, 2010 06:01 pm (UTC)
I vote for smiling! :)

I'm glad that my story touched you! Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
calcifera_fire
Nov. 25th, 2010 12:50 am (UTC)
Wow! This is amazing! It's heart-wrenching and sweet and sad and happy and awesome.
hells_half_acre
Nov. 25th, 2010 01:02 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it :)
debbiel66
Nov. 26th, 2010 05:35 pm (UTC)
I just re-read and wanted to let you know once again how much I loved it!

Any chance for more in this verse...? (and yep, I'm optimistically calling it a verse!)

Thanks again.
hells_half_acre
Nov. 26th, 2010 06:44 pm (UTC)
Haha, probably not...sorry...but I'm glad you like it so much that you want more!! :)
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thegeminisage
Nov. 27th, 2010 02:45 am (UTC)
yyyyyes omg *glee*

The best part about this was the last line. I bet Satan totally hates that car.
hells_half_acre
Nov. 27th, 2010 03:38 am (UTC)
Haha, thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

And yes, Satan really does hate that car ;)
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hells_half_acre
Nov. 30th, 2010 02:22 am (UTC)
I don't think the writers are allowed to read fanfic, but I appreciate the sentiment!

I'm very glad that you liked it. I highly doubt we'll get it in the show - so, you know - I figured I'd create it for myself. ;)
super_pan
Dec. 4th, 2010 03:30 pm (UTC)
Great fic! Man, I bet Lucifer really does hate Dean's car!

This seems to be where the show's headed, near as I can tell. Cept they won't be so nice..
hells_half_acre
Dec. 4th, 2010 08:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

I really didn't expect the show to go here, but now I'm not so sure! It should be interesting no matter what they do! :)
sadritsuka12
Dec. 5th, 2010 02:11 am (UTC)
AWWWWWE LOVE IT YAY SAMMY SPOKE.,,,
hells_half_acre
Dec. 5th, 2010 02:18 am (UTC)
Haha, I'm glad you liked it :)
coocoo4oc_slash
Dec. 5th, 2010 11:23 am (UTC)
And that is why you get to write this into canon. So it is written, so it shall be done.

{seriously, though, this was beautiful. i loved the fluidity of sam's recovery. wasn't too slow or too fast. it was right on track. *hugs you and your fab story*}

<3
hells_half_acre
Dec. 5th, 2010 06:11 pm (UTC)
Aww, thanks :) *hugs you and your comment*

I'm sure they'll go a different direction on the show, but it's nice to have this receive such positive feedback.
auroramama
Dec. 5th, 2010 10:06 pm (UTC)
loved this
I liked that Sam's first words were a tribute to the Impala. Being hated by Satan is quite a compliment to an inanimate object, and the Impala merited it by saving Sam, Dean, and the world.
hells_half_acre
Dec. 5th, 2010 10:12 pm (UTC)
Re: loved this
Thanks! The whole time I was writing it, I didn't know what Sam's first words would actually be, but I knew they would take place in or on the Impala and that she would factor heavily into them...so I'm glad you liked that aspect of it!

:)
roque_clasique
Dec. 6th, 2010 07:41 pm (UTC)
“Satan hates your car,” Sam says.

TOO FUCKIN' RIGHT HE DOES.

YAAAAAY.

Loved this so much!
hells_half_acre
Dec. 6th, 2010 07:47 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!! :)
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